Se você escreve “ok”… mas não tira nota alta, o problema não é vocabulário.
👉 É estrutura.

O avaliador do CELPIP não quer ver inglês bonito…
👉 Ele quer ver organização, clareza e intenção.

E isso você resolve com um checklist.

✅ TASK 1 – EMAIL (Checklist de Estrutura Perfeita)

📌 Base oficial:

• 150–200 palavras
• 3 parágrafos
• Cada parágrafo = 1 objetivo

(Exatamente como no seu material 👇)

✔️ Estrutura obrigatória

1. Opening

• Cumprimento correto (formal/informal)

👉 Frases-chave:

• You know the person (informal)
• Hi John,

• You don’t know the person (formal)
• Dear Mr. Phillips,
• Dear Mrs. Phillips,
• Dear Sir,
• Dear Madam,
• Dear Sir/Madam, / To whom it may concern,

2. Intro sentence

• Motivo claro

👉 Frases-chave:

General

Asking for Help

I would like to ask for your help about…

Complaining

I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction…

I’m writing to complain about…

Thanking

I’d like to thank you very much for…

Apologizing

I’m very sorry that/about…

3. Body (one paragraph for each bullet point)

• Explicar o problema / situação
• Dar exemplos específicos
• Solicitar uma solução

4. Closing & sign-off

• Final educado e correspondente ao nível de formalidade da task

👉 Frases-chave:

I’ll be waiting for your reply. (informal)

Regards,
Yours,
Best wishes,

First name

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I am looking forward to your reply.  (formal)

Regards,

Yours faithfully, OR
Yours sincerely,

First and last name

✍️ MODEL ANSWER – BASIC (Task 1)

Dear Manager,

I am writing to complain about my experience at your restaurant last week.

My wife and I ordered two steaks, but they were burned and not edible. We asked the waiter for help, but he said everything was fine and did not offer any solution.

We also asked to speak to the manager, but no one was available. We were very disappointed with the service and left the restaurant.

I would like to ask for a solution, such as a complimentary meal next time. I hope to continue visiting your restaurant.

Regards,
[First and last name]

✍️ MODEL ANSWER – ADVANCED (Task 1)

Dear Manager,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding my recent dining experience at your restaurant.

Despite choosing your establishment for a special occasion, the quality of the food was unacceptable. The pasta was served cold, and the steak was undercooked, even though it was requested well-done.

Furthermore, the service was extremely disappointing, as the staff was unhelpful and dismissive when we raised our concerns.

Given these issues, I believe a full refund would be appropriate, as the experience did not meet the expected standards. I look forward to your response.

Yours sincerely,
[First and last name]

✅ TASK 2 – OPINION SURVEY (Checklist de Estrutura Perfeita)

📌 Base oficial:

• 150–200 palavras
• 4 parágrafos

✔️ Estrutura obrigatória

1. Introduction (Introduce yourself and state your opinion clearly)

• I am (introduce yourself) I would like to give you my opinion about the (name of the survey) Survey. In my opinion, I think the (option A or B) is the best choice.

2. Argument 1 (Why is your option better? Ideas and examples)

• 1 ideia + explicação + exemplo
• I think my option is more convenient because…
  Another benefit is…

3. Argument 2 (Why isn’t the other option good? Ideas and examples)

• Mostrar desvantagens
• I don’t think option (A or B) is the best one because…
• Another disadvantage is…

4. Conclusion (Reforçar decisão)

• Repetir opinião com outras palavras
• In conclusion, I believe that option (A or B) would be more interesting for everybody because / as…

✍️ MODEL ANSWER – BASIC (Task 2)

I am a resident at 123, Park Street and would like to give my opinion about the city development survey. In my opinion, the Recreational Park is the best option.

Firstly, it is important to have a green area where families can spend time together. Children can play and enjoy outdoor activities.

Secondly, I do not think the Shopping Complex is a good option because it is not healthy. Kids would spend more time eating and watching movies instead of being active.

In conclusion, I believe the Recreational Park is better for the community because it promotes health and family time.

✍️ MODEL ANSWER – ADVANCED (Task 2)

I am a resident in this city and I would like to give my opinion about the city development survey. I strongly believe that the Recreational Park is the better option for our community.

Firstly, it would encourage a healthier lifestyle by providing free access to sports facilities. Additionally, it would create opportunities for young people to engage in team activities and develop social skills.

Secondly, maintaining a green area is essential for environmental preservation. It allows development without destroying natural spaces while still offering a place for residents to relax and connect with nature.

Finally, considering the limited recreational options currently available, this project would significantly improve the quality of life in our city. For these reasons, I strongly support this option.

🧠 Erros que estão derrubando sua nota (e você nem percebe)

🚫 Misturar ideias no mesmo parágrafo
🚫 Não responder TODOS os pontos da pergunta
🚫 Não deixar clara sua opinião
🚫 Escrever bonito… mas sem estrutura e vocabulário refinados

🚀 Mentalidade de nota alta

Você não precisa escrever como nativo.
👉 Você precisa escrever como alguém que entende o jogo da prova.

E esse jogo é estrutura.

🚀 Quer aprender isso passo a passo (e garantir sua nota)?

Se você quer:
✔️ Templates prontos para Task 1 e Task 2
✔️ Correção detalhada com feedback estilo avaliador
✔️ Estratégias para escrever mais rápido e com segurança
✔️ Saber exatamente o que o examinador procura

👉 Então você precisa conhecer o meu Curso Preparatório para o CELPIP

💡 É o método que já ajudou alunos a saírem do travamento e alcançarem a nota necessária para imigração em poucas semanas. Entre em contato e agende já suas aulas!